Post Number: 71
|Posted on Wednesday, January 18, 2017 - 01:54 am: |
Hey Paul James
Really happy that you took the time to post something and obviously spent some time writing it all out. It would really helpful though if you could break the text up into some paragraphs.
It gets really difficult to read and a little off putting when it's just a solid block of words, and I'm sure you want as many readers as possible to enjoy your tales.
Keep typing! X